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People are so dumb[italicized]. Mailynne glared at the clock, trying to scare it into moving faster. So far her attempts had been futile. The obnoxious giggling of the girls behind her had been unbearable ten minutes ago, now they were sheer torture. The news of new students had been the latest gossip all day, and she was tired of hearing it. As she tapped her foot impatiently, she imagined what it would be like if were to accidently throw her text book, hitting the two girls in the head hard enough to knock them out for the rest of the hour. Finally, the lunch bell rang, bringing Mailynne her salvation wi
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